Hello classmates
Today I will talk about Santiago, one where I
was born, grew up and have lived almost 27 years, I say almost because I lived
three years in Valparaiso, where I studied graphic design.
Because of the experience of living in another
city, the opinion that today I have about my hometown.
For 7 or 8 years Santiago do not like, before I had an opinion about it as clearly knew not life elsewhere, did not have the expertise to criticize the place where he was living.
If today Santiago do not like is because of the
uneasiness with which we live every day, way too large distances, wasted a lot
of time to travel these distances, and crime. and as a result people go hurry,
moody and everything begins to fight the unknown side.
One of the solutions to mitigate the bad things
out of the city I think is to live in the center of it, in a way of being close
to everything, but in this case we have another problem, space in general to
live in Santiago center only you can choose an apartment, and I love my house
with a yard on the other side is the noise pollution, much vehicular traffic, construction
noise at the sides.
In short, despite all the bad characteristics I
mentioned in Santiago, not to say other than layers of seeing all the good things
in Santiago can have access to everything, both commercial, cultural,
educational, etc.. and today the reason I still live in this city is about
education, but I intend to go and live in any region, where you have work,
after finishing my degree, because I think that even with all the services you
can offer Santiago not worth it in exchange for a quiet life.
Dear Gennipher,
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Thanks for your impressions about Santiago. You need to pay attention to the order you use to write. Pay attention to these obs.:
one where I was born?,
Because of the experience of living in another city, the opinion that today I have about my hometown…..IS?? WHAT?
For 7 or 8 years Santiago do not like (NOT CLEAR).
before I had an opinion about it as clearly knew not life elsewhere(NOT CLEAR) did not have the expertise to criticize the place where he?? was living.
If today Santiago do not like (SANTIAGO CANNOT LIKE OR DISLIKE ANYTHING, YOU LIKE IT OR NOT)
everything begins to fight the unknown side (NOT CLEAR).
One of the solutions to mitigate the bad things out of the city I think is to live in the center of it, (in a way of being) TOBE close to everything,
...not to say other than layers (NOT CLEAR).of seeing…
Regards,
jc